Tokyo Metropolitan Kokusai High School - Help!!

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Hi!
I'm a foreign junior high school student, and I'm thinking of taking the essay examinations at Tokyo Metropolitan Kokusai High school, but I know that it will be a difficult process because strict selection process. So, I was wondering if you guys could please critique my essays at worldsunknown.wordpress.com and give me advice and all that stuff. Anything would be greatly appreciated. Also, if you know anything about the interviews there, please, please, give me an overview just so I know what to expect! Thank you!